Of Wrestlers and Courtesans: Musharraf Ali Farooqi's 'Between Clay and Dust' is good enough for a quick read
This review will probably my laziest review to date, and
that’s because this book was incapable of rousing any emotion in me. I read it
the way one flicks through a magazine while waiting at a dentist’s office: you
might stumble across an interesting article, and there might be something that
might catch your eye, but at the end of the day you willingly leave it behind
you when your name is called.
Probably the reason for this book’s failure to engage is in
its inability to dig a little deeper, to give more complexity to issues just begging
to be discussed. Musharraf Ali Farooqi writes from a distance, and the short
chapters, lack of extended dialogues, and overall aura of aloofness in the
writing does the setting a disservice.
It was not so much the changing times that troubled her, but the worst
they seemed to bring out in people.
And this aloofness is a damn shame because on the surface
this book has got some really cool stuff going on. It’s set some time after
partition, and while it remains unclear whether we are in India or Pakistan,
the extraordinary part of the story is that it doesn’t seem to matter. For all
the obsession in post-partition literature with the creation of two separate,
distinct states, Farooqi renders them both the same, marking with one swift
stroke one of the most repeated points about the subcontinent’s partition: that
even with all the animosity between the two countries, we are really still the
same.
Nobody expected that in Partition’s wake would follow a slow
disintegration of values that would unravel the inner city.
The partition is recent, the city is in turmoil, and our two
main protagonists, a pahalwan (wrestler) called Ustad Ramzi from a famous
wrestlers’ akhara, and the tawaif (courtesan) Gohar Jan from an equally
famous kotha, are slowly coming face to face with the realization that their
days of glory are ending. Most of the story focuses on Ustad Ramzi’s conflicted
relationship with his younger brother Tamami, whom Ramzi believes is unable to
understand what he calls the sanctity of the akhara.
Ustad Ramzi was disappointed by his brother’s disregard of what his
elders held a sacred ritual of their creed. He told himself that if Tamami
failed to realize the important and purpose of those humble rituals, he would
never understand the essence of the creed.
Most of Ramzi’s single-minded determination to preserve the
holiness of the art of wrestling was lost to me, because for god’s sake, it’s just a game. But try saying that
to my brother when he yells at the TV screen when the referee makes a wrong
decision and I get a very different response, so clearly games aren’t just
games to some people.
Funnily enough, the discussions about the wrestling
preparations and the intricate details of how wrestlers ate, lived, and breathed
are what actually lend this book its air of authenticity. Musharraf Ali Farooqi
has done his research, and it’s fascinating to read about the ridiculous amount
of food Tamami eats in preparation of one of his bouts, or the almost religious
fervour with which wrestling matches were treated.
Much less fascinating are the going-ons at the kotha, which
is supremely disappointing since there was so much potential there. The female
relationships, the complexity of the power feminine allure wielded in that
time, the cultural relevance: there was so much material to work with, but
Farooqi barely touches it, choosing to focus more on the wrestlers and less on
the females in the story.
Gohar Jan did say once that in this world a tawaif’s identity is the
only one allowed to women like her.
In fact, the basic premise of the story, that of the
friendship (or romance? Is there a romance?) between the two main characters is
so entirely flimsy that it’s hard to remember what it’s supposed to be about. Ustad
Ramzi and Gohar Jan are accidental acquaintances, barely passing each other by,
with no interesting conversations to keep us invested. It’s hard to understand
why we root for their relationship, or even what their relationship is supposed
to be based on. Why does Ustad Ramzi keep going to Gohar Jan’s kotha after the
mehfils have stopped? Why does Gohar Jan go out of her way to ask a favour of
the mayor when Ramzi’s akhara’s cemetery gets flooded with sewage water during
heavy rains? I have literally no idea,
because there’s no sense of connection.
Those who watched Ustad Ramzi for any signs of becoming infatuated with
the tawaif were disappointed. At the end of the mehfil, he always left her
kotha with others.
This idea of keeping the reader at a distance finds its way
into the historical representation as well. Musharraf Ali Farooqi does exactly
what Kamila Shamsie did in Burnt Shadows, but to lesser effect. Like
Shamsie’s book, he takes a large-scale event (in Shamsie’s case, the atomic
bomb, the partition, 9/11, and in this book, the creation of a new state) and
brings it down to the human, the personal, but it’s hard to decide whether it
was an exceedingly poor attempt or if it was done so well that I missed it
entirely. There’s a sense of things crumbling and falling apart, but there’s no
urgency, no tension in the text, which leaves one only remotely concerned about
the lives of these characters.
He remained there in the growing silence, as darkness fell over the
inner city.
On a parting note, the one thing that really endeared itself
to me in this book was the lack of pandering to a western audience. Musharraf
Ali Farooqi writes with authority for a reader who knows, in a manner that
seems to encourage those who don’t to ask more questions, to remain curious and
interested. There are no long winded explanations shoved in as side notes or
awkward sentences that explain what a kotha or an akhara is. In this book,
context explains everything, and that is as it should be.
Recommendation
When a friend asked me whether she should read this book, I
told her why not, because it’s not that long. Now ideally that’s not the best
recommendation one can give. It’s like saying, ‘you might as well, because it’s
not that big a waste of your time’, but on the other hand I did think it was
worth reading, even if only once. Musharraf Ali Farooqi writes well, the
setting is fascinating, and where else would you get to read about wrestlers
and courtesans within one, singular text? When you’re lazy and in the mood and
can’t find anything else to read, I say give this a go.